By the time its over,
I will know.
There was time
Long enough for both of us,
I, never thought about,
Which you did.
You always did…
My difference
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By the time its over,
I will know.
There was time
Long enough for both of us,
I, never thought about,
Which you did.
You always did…
Beautifully written. I agree with Ishita-that final line was perfect. The voice in this poem is haunting in its sadness-that inevitable ending.
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Thank you so much. It is hard to reflect pain into words, at times it works sometimes it don’t. Really happy you enjoyed it.
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You’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing your poetry. As a poet, I certainly can relate to the impact of word choice on conveying just the right emotion. I wish you a Blessed 2020.
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Thank you, have a wonderful new year.
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The last line was just perfect!!
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Thank you, Ishita
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